Warmness

The following just ran down the brain like a bead of sweat down the forehead:
Peopled cocooned in air conditioning

Can’t crack the window too hot, whaaaah, burp, whaaaah

Can’t sweat

Ruin the dress

Me

Bring it on

Love to sweat

Alive

Don’t worry you won’t die

Sweat down the breast

Tank top drenched

Oh how alive

Physical labor outside

The ’65 has no a.c.

Just windows down, fast

Loud, exciting music

Air drums more sweat

YES

Alive!

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8 thoughts on “Warmness

  1. I hope you know I was just teasing you. Your words… your title, that’s the way it should be. Perhaps I need to do less of what is expected.
    Happy day to you!

  2. You bring smiles!!

    Btw…. It should say hotness, not warmness. First, if it’s warm enough that I’m sweating between my breasts, it’s hot, not warm! Second, this piece is just pretty hot, not warm. So there…. Says the sassy lady! Lol…. Hot!

  3. Lol… This is so fun. I love it! Such strong visual pictures. How do you create this? I want to be a poet so bad and it just doesn’t come. I sweat just thinking about it! Lol… Terrific!

    1. glad you like the piece. you know i have tried poetry many times past but nothing really would last.
      a spiritual awakening of sorts
      has taken me to new ports
      i enjoy writing the essay
      hoping to bring out my bessay
      one day while working on a story
      i decided filler in-between was needed in order to keep people interested and to keep my pen moving,
      improving.
      but now i want to write poems as well so whilst at work my stare is bare like a deer in headlights.
      also there has been conflict in my life as of late so like other writers, artist your work is the door to another world away so you dont end up on the floor.

      jim

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